Lightning Dragon Slayer Spells

[Ginevra Shepard]

Name: Lighning Dragon's Arrow
Rank: D
Cost: 10
Requirements: Lightning Dragon Slayer
Class: Offensive
Effect: Ginevra rises her hands in front of her and gathers a small amount of lightnings. Soon upon that, Ginevra separates her palms, making the amount bigger and bigger, until a bright yellow magic seal appears, a Dragon head in the middle. At the speed of 10m/s, a 10cm wide and 30cm large arrow made out of pure lightning gets shot towards the opponent. Upon impact, the arrow can produce Skin Level cuts. The arrow deals D Ranked damage.
Duration: Instant
Cooldown: 3 Posts

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Name: Lightning Dragon's Charged Fist
Rank: D
Cost: 10 (5)
Requirements: Lightning Dragon Slayer
Class: Offensive
Effect: Ginevra raises his hands in the air, a yellow magic seal appearing above them, and slowly, lightnings begin crawling around her hands, covering her hands. The lightnings remain around her hands as she proceeds to attack the enemy. Once the user hits the enemy, the enemy shall recieve D Ranked damage.
Duration: Sustained
Cooldown: 4

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Name: Lightning Dragon's Bullet
Rank: D
Cost: 10
Requirements: Lightning Dragon Slayer
Class: Offensive
Effect: The user gathers a small amount of lightnings in his mouth and release it in a quick and small amount of lightning. Upon impact, the ''bullet'' deals D Ranked damage, its maximum range is of 15 meters, and it can travel at the speed of 10m/s. The bullet is around 10 cm thick.
Duration: Instant
Cooldown: 4

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Name: Lightning Dragon's Heavenward Halberd
Rank: C
Cost: 20
Requirements: Lightning Dragon Slayer
Class: Offensive
Effect: Ginevra rises her hands in the air at her sides, slowly, but surely generating and gathering electricity between her open, facing palms. This is composed rather quickly into a 1,80m large spear made out of lightning none less, which Ginevra uses and proceeds to hurl at the enemy. Upon impact with a target, it deals C ranked damage, and covers the target that was hit in black lightnings, soon upon that releasing a powerful blast of lightning that spirals out from the epicenter of the point where the spear impacted. The blast deals C Ranked damage to everything it touches, and its maximum range is of 4m around the epicenter. This blast is produced only the first time the spear impacts, alas. The next impacts of the spear, regardless against which enemy they are, won't produce the secondary wave. The maximum range for the spear itself is of 16m, while the maximum range of the explosion itself is of 4m.
Duration: Instant
Cooldown: 5

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[Ginevra Shepard]

~Bump for Completion~

[Linedwell Rainrex]

Lightning Dragon's Arrow - Please specify that this deals "D-ranked damage" in the description of the spell.

Lightning Dragon's Charged Fist - In the description of the spell you say that it deals C-ranked damage, yet, this is a D-ranked spell. You can either make the rank of this spell C-ranked, or fix this and state that the spell does D-ranked damage on impact.

Lightning Dragon's Bullet - There isn't really anything wrong with this spell, but I just wanted to let you know that the maximum range of a D-rank spell can be 15 meters, you don't necessarily have to limit it to 5 meters. If you strictly wanted it at 5 meters, that's fine too.

Lightning Dragon's Heavenward Halberd - In order for this spell to work and and still be within the ranges allowed for a C-ranked spell, you must state the maximum range for the spear itself is 16 meters, that way it accounts for the 4 meters that will be added as a result of the explosion that happens once the spear makes impact with anything. Another things is, the resulting explosion would cause C-ranked damage as well, since this is all one attack. If the spear happens hit someone and then explode, they would only be hit with one instance C-ranked damage, since if they were hit by the spear and the explosion as well it would count as two attacks, BUT, that doesn't mean that if someone was near your opponent they wouldn't be hurt. If someone else is within range of the blast, they'll be hit with C-ranked damage as well. This spell's duration would also be instant, so change that and remove the MP sustain cost that you put.

Bump once you make these changes and everything should be all good.

[Ginevra Shepard]

~Bump~

[Linedwell Rainrex]

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