Anson Kazane [Done]

[Anson Kazane]

Name: Anson Kazane

Biographical Information:
Age: 23
Birth Date: 26, May, X813.
Birthplace: Outskirts of Crocus
Relatives: Father: Deceased
Mother: Unknown
Brother: Alive


Physical Description:
Gender: Male
Height: 5'11
Weight: 165 lbs
General Description: Anson has a lean build with fair skin, standing at 5'11 and weighing 165 lbs. He has jet black hair, that hangs down and frames his face, with some bangs that hang over his eyes. His hair extends down to his shoulder blades and is often tied together and left to flow wildly at the end. His outfit consists of a small dark red shirt that covers his chest and extends down his right arm and hand, covering only his thumb. He wears armor plating that covers his chest, his pants are a dark red to match his shirt with a black and grey pointed extension hanging from his waist, with black boots. The last thing he wears is a black cape with a dark grey trim that he wears over the left side of his body, but may pull it around to fully hide his form. His guild tattoo is located on his right shoulder and is dark grey in color.

Face Claim: My OC, drawn by Lilthal

Personal Information:
Sexuality: Heterosexual
Personality: Anson is a man who prefers his solitude; while he doesn't mind being in groups, being alone just lets him be more at ease. He is usually a rather quiet man but can be prone to random outbursts; such as blurting out embarrassing things about anybody who happens to be in the vicinity, even if they aren't true, just to see their reactions. However, most of the time, he does keep to himself as he is usually always thinking things over about the situation that he finds himself in. He can be serious at times, or laid back at others.

While he generally acts as if he doesn't particularly care about others enough to get involved in their lives; inside, he is already trying to think of a way to help them in whatever way he can. In his mind, even the simplest action can make all the difference when it comes to others, although he'd never admit it to others. He will try to hide his true intentions even from those closest to him, not because he is afraid or anything, but mainly because in his mindset that the more people know what he wants, then the more people there will be that will try to manipulate and control him to get it. A trait that he learned from his elder brother at a young age; another trait from his brother that sunk into Anson is the idea that it is better to help others than himself, although it never quite took as much a hold inside Anson as it did his brother.

Magic Information:
Magic: Take Over: Predator Soul
Description: Take Over allows the user to, essentially, "take over" the power (or the body, in the case of a Vulcan) of an entity and use it to fight. It can increase the power, strength, and speed of the Caster, sometimes adding a new skill, such as flying, or swimming. It allows the user to record and seal a monster's body part they have touched into their body, gaining the ability to subsequently transform their body into that of the creature; whether it be partial or full.

Advantages: Advantages to Take Over magic is the versatility that it offers the user in terms of spells, physical increases, intelligence, etc. By partially transforming ones body, the user can assume the partial powers of the soul of which they have taken. However, there is also a full body form, in which every trait of the soul is brought into the users body. Fully transforming then into the very thing they have subjugated and granting them full spells from the soul. This form of magic is virtually limitless in the combinations that can be pulled off if the user is proficient in the take over arts.

Disadvantages: Drawbacks of this magic is the requirement of the user to subjugate the soul of the beast they wish to take over. Failure to assume control can result in a mindless beast that will rampage until beaten or the user gains control. The risks further increase depending on how powerful the soul is, with the higher risk of a rampage. Meanwhile the beast is constantly fighting for control while in a full body take over mode; with this, the user may not be able to properly control the strength of the take over itself and cause extreme damage by accident. This requires extreme care from the user to proper handle.

Chronological and Political Information:
Alignment: Neutral
Guild: Blue Pegasus
Background History: Born on the outskirts of of the capital city of Crocus, Anson was the youngest child of 2. His elder brother often cared for the boy in his younger years, when their parents out working in the city, they would often be gone for days at a time. Leaving the two to fend for themselves, things were good in their life, for awhile. Anson and his brother would go on trips themselves and look at the sights and fish for their dinner. Anson adored his brothers trait of helping others before himself, something that began to take hold inside Anson himself. He respected his brothers outlook on life, to help others in any way you could. He knew his brother would risk his own life to help another, something that Anson himself thought foolish, but he kept it to himself. One day when they were out looking at the valley of their home, some of his brothers friends came to speak with him. Anson himself wasn't privy to what was discussed, but by the look on their faces, it wasn't good news. His brother had the more worried face of the group, but even when his friends had gone, he wouldn't tell Anson what happened. Instead he put on a smile and acted as if everything was fine, however, he knew it was a lie.

Seeing how upset his brother was, Anson didn't wish to force him into talking, and so let the time pass by. Years later after his brother had left to live his own life, Anson was sitting on the roof of his home as he often did to be alone. As he looked up at the night sky and watched the stars, he wondered what his brother was doing at that moment. However, he was brought out of his thoughts by the sounds of screaming from the forest. Normally he wouldn't be so quick to jump and help as he knew people from the city liked to play around this area. But as he knew his parents had decided to take a nightly stroll, he was now worried and took off into the treeline. As he ran, he could see the glimmering of a fire in the distance. Finally reaching the flames, he was greeted by the mangled corpse of his father. His lifeless body laying on the ground with his right arm missing and half of his left sitting above the fire being roasted. His fathers body was covered in cuts and sliced in a puddle of blood that left his clothes drenched. Falling to the ground, Anson covered his mouth as tears began to fall down his cheeks. The air in the area subtly picking up as his emotions began to rage, he held back the urge to vomit from the sight of his loving parent. His mind jumping back and forth between fear for what had happened to his mother, and his feelings of what had happened to his father. He knew there were people that were not to be trusted, and even what some would consider evil. But he never thought that someone was capable of doing what he was now seeing.

As he slowly raised to his feet, Anson stared at the remains of his father and reached for a stick that was slowly catching flame. Taking a deep breath, Anson tossed the flame onto the remains of his father, he knew it was too much to give a proper burial at this point and decided to leave it at this. Knowing his mother was still out there, he spent the rest of the night searching for any clues about her whereabouts, but found nothing. As he slowly returned back to his home as the sun began to rise, he knew there was no going back to his old life now. He wanted to know what happened to his mother, whether she was alive or not, he needed to know. Walking into his old room, he grabbed the clothes his brother had sent him for his birthday and proceeded to burn the house to the ground as he left. With his previous life gone, there was no room for the house to remain as a bridge any longer.  Several years had then passed since Anson left his old life and took on mercenary requests to gain money, while he searched for any hints to his mother along the way.

[Tsukiya Ishida]

Yo, Tsukiya here, I'll be grading your app. Let's begin.

Some of your coding is a bit off, I think you've got an extra italics bbcode somewhere in there. You need to fix that.

General appearance has to be at least 150 words, you're at 129. Just another sentence or two should do it.

Personality needs to be at least 250 words, you're at 218. Just add a few more sentences and that should cover it.

Other than those things, the app is fine.

Bump when edited.

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[Tsukiya Ishida]

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